Bonjour, j'ai fait un dialogue a propos de notre temps libre que je dois rendre demain. Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait y jeter un coup d’œil et me dire ce qu'il
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Bonjour, j'ai fait un dialogue a propos de notre temps libre que je dois rendre demain. Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait y jeter un coup d’œil et me dire ce qu'il en pense au niveau de la grammaire et des fautes? Bien a vous.
Anglais : Now you’re talking !
Situation 2:
T: Hi Brandon!
B: Hi Tony, I hadn’t seen you before! How are you?
T: Really, I didn’t know that you are at this party tonight.
I‘m fine but tired because I had played badminton just before this party.
B: Oh! You have played badminton! Are-you a athletic person?
T: Yes, I am, and also I run every day with my dog. And you are you a healthy guy?
B: What do you mean by a healthy guy?
T: For me it’s when you do sport and take care of your body during your free time.
B: Sometimes that’s true but on the other hand I often go out with my friends and I drink alcohol. I know it's wrong but I do a lot of sport
T: Do you play football?
B: Yes, I do, and that’s because I don’t have many time for my homework’s. I have three training sessions per week and I have a match on Saturday.
T: Oh nice, the next time, I think that I will come see you when you play in Soignies.
B: And you can you tell me a little more about your activities in your free time?
T: Actually, I don't have much free time in my life, so I'm always try to strike a balance between my study and playing video games. I spend a lot of time to play to an action-adventure game Destiny.
B: I know Destiny, it’s a good video game!
T: Are you a good player of Destiny?
B: No, I’m not good in video games, except for FIFA. I have all FIFA since 1998, it’s my favorite video game.
T: Really! That’s good, It my favorite video game too just after Destiny, we should to play together soon! My gamer tag is Unix Akenator.
B: Yes, of course! Now I have to come back home! See you later!
T: See you soon, on FIFA.
Anglais : Now you’re talking !
Situation 2:
T: Hi Brandon!
B: Hi Tony, I hadn’t seen you before! How are you?
T: Really, I didn’t know that you are at this party tonight.
I‘m fine but tired because I had played badminton just before this party.
B: Oh! You have played badminton! Are-you a athletic person?
T: Yes, I am, and also I run every day with my dog. And you are you a healthy guy?
B: What do you mean by a healthy guy?
T: For me it’s when you do sport and take care of your body during your free time.
B: Sometimes that’s true but on the other hand I often go out with my friends and I drink alcohol. I know it's wrong but I do a lot of sport
T: Do you play football?
B: Yes, I do, and that’s because I don’t have many time for my homework’s. I have three training sessions per week and I have a match on Saturday.
T: Oh nice, the next time, I think that I will come see you when you play in Soignies.
B: And you can you tell me a little more about your activities in your free time?
T: Actually, I don't have much free time in my life, so I'm always try to strike a balance between my study and playing video games. I spend a lot of time to play to an action-adventure game Destiny.
B: I know Destiny, it’s a good video game!
T: Are you a good player of Destiny?
B: No, I’m not good in video games, except for FIFA. I have all FIFA since 1998, it’s my favorite video game.
T: Really! That’s good, It my favorite video game too just after Destiny, we should to play together soon! My gamer tag is Unix Akenator.
B: Yes, of course! Now I have to come back home! See you later!
T: See you soon, on FIFA.
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse marionpot
Franchement c'est super !! -
2. Réponse Ash04
il y a quelques petites fautes mais sinon ça va c'est bien.