Salut tout le monde ! J'aurai besoin d'aide pour cette expression orale en Anglais pour demain Pouvez-vous me dire s'il y a des fautes et si je pourrais rajoute

j'ai corrigé quelques petits détails (la prochaine fois pense qu'on ne met pas d'article quand on dit qu'on aime tel ou tel sport ;))

 Hello  ! My name is Luna , I am 16 . I live in Labenne , a town in the south of France but i was born in Agen. I love the rugby , the rowing , to sing… My favorite hobbies are going out with my friends , shopping…
I would like to Participate in The Voice ! I think I am THE candidate who is necessary to them because i am motivated , i have a spirit of competion, the willingness and i am hard-working but i have one problem : I am too shy and I stress a lot in front of people. My family and my friends will be there to support me , they believe in my talent I want to make them proud of me. I hope I can succeed in this casting and I hope that someone of the judges choose me because I want to win this competition ! 

So vote for me ! Thank you