J'aurais besoin d'une correction s'il vous plait The most part of people escaping their country it is to have a better fate than what they expect them to their
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The most part of people escaping their country it is to have a better fate than what they expect them to their countries. Often in their country the war there, they put all the money remaining in order to survive. They prefer to risk their lives at sea in conditions terrible, rather than get killed in their country. This gives them the hope to live in its condition is freedom, peace. They put all their hope in the crossing, even if they are aware of the dangers. All they have in mind is survival and protect his loved ones. They expect more nothing of their country, all they want is to flee and escape the massacres, famine, disease and poverty.
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La plus part des personnes qui s’échappe de leur pays c’est pour avoir un meilleur sort que ce qu’ils leur attendent dans leur pays. Souvent dans leur pays il y a la guerre, ils mettent tout l’argent qui leur reste afin de survivre. Ils préfèrent risquer leur vie en mer dans des conditions atroce, plutôt que de se faire tuer dans leur pays. Ce qui leur donne l’espoir de vivre dans c’est condition c’est la liberté, la paix. Ils mettent tout leur espoir dans la traversée, même si ils connaissent les dangers. Tous ce qu’ils ont en tête c’est la survie et protéger ses proches. Ils n’attendent plus rien de leur pays, tous ce qu’ils veulent c’est fuir et échapper aux massacres, à la famine, les maladies et la pauvreté.
The most part of people escaping their country it is to have a better fate than what they expect them to their countries. Often in their country the war there, they put all the money remaining in order to survive. They prefer to risk their lives at sea in conditions terrible, rather than get killed in their country. This gives them the hope to live in its condition is freedom, peace. They put all their hope in the crossing, even if they are aware of the dangers. All they have in mind is survival and protect his loved ones. They expect more nothing of their country, all they want is to flee and escape the massacres, famine, disease and poverty.
Ce que j'ai voulu dire
La plus part des personnes qui s’échappe de leur pays c’est pour avoir un meilleur sort que ce qu’ils leur attendent dans leur pays. Souvent dans leur pays il y a la guerre, ils mettent tout l’argent qui leur reste afin de survivre. Ils préfèrent risquer leur vie en mer dans des conditions atroce, plutôt que de se faire tuer dans leur pays. Ce qui leur donne l’espoir de vivre dans c’est condition c’est la liberté, la paix. Ils mettent tout leur espoir dans la traversée, même si ils connaissent les dangers. Tous ce qu’ils ont en tête c’est la survie et protéger ses proches. Ils n’attendent plus rien de leur pays, tous ce qu’ils veulent c’est fuir et échapper aux massacres, à la famine, les maladies et la pauvreté.
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Most part of the people, which escapes from their country, it is to have a better fate than for what they wait them in their country. Often in their country, there is a war, they put all the money which stays with them to survive. They prefer to risk their life at sea in conditions atrocious, rather than to be killed in their country. What gives them the hope to live in it is condition it is the freedom, the peace. They put all their hope in the crossing, even if they know the dangers. All what they have in mind it are the survival and to protect his close friends All what they have in mind it are the survival and to protect his close friends They wait for nothing more of their country, for all what they want it is to run away and to escape the massacres, the famine, the diseases and the poverty.