Salut quelqu'un pourrais lire mon dm et me dire si il y a des fautes ou des phrases qui ne sont pas très juste et qui pourrais me les corriger s'il vous plaît ?

Je t'ai corriger ton devoir :

I begin to pack my suitcase. I decide to take my camera and my personel computer. These two items will be useful for work as well as to photograph the beautiful landscapes. Now I add to my suitcase some clothes and some other things that i will need for my trip. I have finished packing my suitcase ! 
Now it's time to leave, I direct myself to the saint-exupéry airport in Lyon. I checked in at the Luthausa counter. The luthausa airlines is a great company and the stewardesses are very nice.My plane arrives in Manchester so i'm very happy ! I now go to the Manchester .. Hotel. 
I visit the following places : (écris la liste des choses que tu as fait)
I chose Manchester as my favorite city because the atmosphere is really great and the city is great.
Liverpool seems to be a cool city but i still prefer Manchester.

Voilà ! :)

Très bien pas de faute!